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PostSubject: Maximus Ariya vs Loki Kasawa, The Unforgotten Meeting   Thu Jun 03, 2010 9:04 am

Maximus Ariya surveyed his surroundings, a menacing force had come upon this spot and he had responded, his first patrol in the human realm and it hadn't been much time for a hollow to arrive! Max shunpoed through the city, coming upon shintou temple within the area known as 'Japan'. A raven-haired young girl bleeding violently from her neck attempted to scream, but was unable while a man around her age was consumed by a disgusting figure... A mut- looking hollow.

Max sprinted to the girl, tossing his secondary sword through the air, its hilt slamming her in the forehead and performing the soul burial as he rounded on the hollow in an attempt to save the boy.

"Fall, spirit!" he shouted as his stroke came down at the hollows back, hoping it struck true.
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PostSubject: Re: Maximus Ariya vs Loki Kasawa, The Unforgotten Meeting   Thu Jun 03, 2010 9:13 am

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Before he could think, he was wolfing down the dying man, eating him as his screams slowly began to end and his weak struggles faded. When he was done there, he turned to Minami, the hunger unabated, but when he turned, she was gone. Confused, Loki sniffed the air, but all he could smell was the coppery smell of blood that was slowly dissipating into the air as if evaporating, vanishing as Minami had.

((Above from the Omake this leads off from in HM part of the site.))



Then suddenly, Loki felt something dig into his pelt, dragging a sort of whimper-growl from his throat. Curiously, he looked behind him, meeting focused red eyes. Loki's green ones looked at him questioningly, and he let out a whimper in question as to why he had attacked.
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PostSubject: Re: Maximus Ariya vs Loki Kasawa, The Unforgotten Meeting   Thu Jun 03, 2010 9:31 am

Max was confused, the hollow didn't even seem to understand this was fight or die, how dishonorable! Max surged backwards as the soul burial completed, scooping up his second blade and twisting it into a backwards grip.

"Come on," Max screeched, "Or do you want to die without a fight, foolish hollow!"
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PostSubject: Re: Maximus Ariya vs Loki Kasawa, The Unforgotten Meeting   Thu Jun 03, 2010 9:40 am

Loki looked the man over, and the first thing he noticed was aggression. Pain and aggression....a fight? "....want to die without a fight, foolish hollow?" The man roared at him, and Loki nodded. A match.

"Time to play?" Loki asked, leaning back onto his rear legs, the fur over his arms receding to reveal razor sharp claws, his right one missing skin and muscle to reveal just bone and blood vessels. The left one was also broken at the wrist, and he grimaced at the movement, but took his stance anyways, just like sensei taught him.


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PostSubject: Re: Maximus Ariya vs Loki Kasawa, The Unforgotten Meeting   Thu Jun 03, 2010 9:44 am

Max noticed the stance, it was that of an unarmed master, and Max smiled, this might just be fun. Max surged across the field, coming in with his shorter and striking at the right arm in a stab while coming at the left with a slash, a chant upon his lips.
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PostSubject: Re: Maximus Ariya vs Loki Kasawa, The Unforgotten Meeting   Thu Jun 03, 2010 9:54 am

Loki dodged, managing to successful keep his right arm attached, but his left arm was already broken, and he wasn't able to move as quickly with it. Loki howled at the pain as the hand was severed, and growled at the one who had done it as he used the close range the attack had given him to head butt the man, only....something inside him told him to do something else, something far better. So instead of a headbutt he came in lower, his jaws opening as they reached out to tear into the man's exposed throat.
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PostSubject: Re: Maximus Ariya vs Loki Kasawa, The Unforgotten Meeting   Thu Jun 03, 2010 2:05 pm

As the figure closed in, Max smiled as he turned his hand towards his opponent and whispered two kido in succession.

"Bakudo 3: Hikari-no Mekurumeku, Bakudo 26: Kyakko!" cried Max throwing his hand into his foe's face. A flash of blinding light flew out and as it did so Max faded into nothing, completely gone... To his foe's perception at least... The bite however, would ensure that his foe didn't seem him, but tasted, smelled, and for any god you wished sake, felt his skin give way beneath the ferocious bite... Blood surged from his shoulder, his left arm becoming usless, his zanpakuto slipping through his fingers, but lucking, his right had stabbed at the foe's face when he brought it up to perform his spells...
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PostSubject: Re: Maximus Ariya vs Loki Kasawa, The Unforgotten Meeting   Thu Jun 03, 2010 8:51 pm

As Loki's jaws sunk into the flesh of the man's right shoulder, he felt the cold blade slice its own way into his neck. Nothing particularly deep, only digging through the skin, but the cold metal soon became warm as he felt a hot liquid begin to seep from the wound. Blood. Coming from his throat, his hand, from the flesh between his teeth. So much blood. The smell overwhelmed him, making it seem as if the whole world was soaked in it. The rush of it went to his head, and he felt his grip slack with his disorientation. To top it off, a sudden blinding light struck his eyes, jarring his scattered mind and further making his grip weaken so that for a moment he was just holding on by a shred of skin as he blinked, dazed, into thin air.


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PostSubject: Re: Maximus Ariya vs Loki Kasawa, The Unforgotten Meeting   Thu Jun 03, 2010 9:02 pm

Max felt the grip loosen, a smile through the pain, hell he actually enjoyed it to be telling the truth. Maybe he was as messed up as his adoptive-father had told him... He acted, kicking out at his foe's chest, he then twisted his blade around and followed with a downward stroke, hoping to get a shoulder or the foes chest...

"You will fall before me, little mut," Max laughed manically.
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PostSubject: Re: Maximus Ariya vs Loki Kasawa, The Unforgotten Meeting   Thu Jun 03, 2010 9:40 pm

The sudden movement of a foot slamming into his stomach brought Loki back to the match. He needed to focus. If he lost his focus, he would lose the battle, as sensei always said. And so he tried to focus, but too late, as another bite of cold metal bit down into his right shoulder, automatically his hands came up to grab the metal, his body flowing with the move to throw his opponent by the gripping arm....

Except one of his hands was missing. And it wasn't an arm digging into his shoulder.

This turned the whole move against him as his right hand gripped the blade's tip, twisting it sideways out of his shoulder, thrashing the wound there. It also pointed the sharp point of the blade towards the on-coming nub of his left arm, causing it to split the arm straight down the middle as it slammed into the metal. The momentum jarred the blade too, causing the tip that his right hand had put pressure on to dig into his throat, severing the already wounded jugular.

Suddenly Loki could feel every drop in his blood as it left his body, just as he had before, taking with it his body heat and his consciousness. The cold began to envelope him once more, the heat transferring to just outside his skin rather than inside it. He wanted to take that heat back in, to save to starve off the coming cold. To absorb the burning liquid....to become it. Yes, if he was blood, he'd never feel the cold again, right? Just fiery heat that could never run away, because there was nothing else to get cold, just him and the flow of warmth......

And then suddenly he could feel it, his whole body sizzling and loosing substance. Boiling and evaporating as every pour began to turn red, every cell turning crimson and rising into the air in a cascade. And soon, that was all he was, a red mist floating in the air above the man, pieces of him dribbling onto the man's clothes. He felt those pieces of his body fade from his reach and he pulled the drops hovering nearby away from the man so that he couldn't lose anymore of the warm tide that surrounded him, that WAS him.
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PostSubject: Re: Maximus Ariya vs Loki Kasawa, The Unforgotten Meeting   Thu Jun 03, 2010 9:51 pm

Max certainly had not expected the sudden victory, hell, he hadn't expected the sudden events. As the hollow faded away, assuming that's what his instructors had meant, he burst into hysterical laughter...

"Stupid mut," he said in between gulps of air, at the end of his laugh, "You have fallen upon the blade of Maximus 'the Demon' Ariya of the Third Squad of Seireitei and their Gotei 13." He reached up and turned on his communications bead, "This is Ariya, I have a confirmed single-handed first kill, time to break out some sake!" Max turned from the scene after recovering his second blade. He entered the next room, and his eyes met the same eyes as the foe he'd just downed... Could this be why he was here? Max looked over the family and back to the portrait, its image depicting him wearing a inverted color scheme of the shinigami clothes. What in the hell is that ugly clothing suppose to symbolize? With traditional clothes and a black belt? What the hell? Max thought to himself, but what struck him the most was the image was of a youth, very young, and decided to examine the corpse...

Sticking his head through the odd shaped, domed plastic, metal, and little wood, box, he saw it, a figure missing an arm... Disgusting, Max thought to himself before leaving them to the drawn out service, Fitting he should die next to his funeral.
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PostSubject: Re: Maximus Ariya vs Loki Kasawa, The Unforgotten Meeting   Thu Jun 03, 2010 10:00 pm

In a weird kind of full-body echolocation, Loki felt rather than saw the man leave, but he might as well have seen it as the vibrations of the air movement translated into sound, which sort of translated into sight. It was odd and disorienting and for a second after the man left the range of Loki's senses, he remained where he was, trying to focus, but it was beyond him. Everything seemed to be beyond him, actually, as all his senses but touch had shut down or been funneled into that one remaining sense. And nothing was touching him except for empty air that didn't even breeze....for a while, and then all of a sudden the air conditioner came on, and Loki found himself being sucked through a nearby vent and pushed into the open night air.

There, a breeze caught him, showing him the way, and he decided to follow it wandering towards his next adventure in the form of bloody mist.....
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PostSubject: Re: Maximus Ariya vs Loki Kasawa, The Unforgotten Meeting   Thu Jun 03, 2010 10:00 pm

We're done, please someone grade.
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PostSubject: Re: Maximus Ariya vs Loki Kasawa, The Unforgotten Meeting   Fri Jun 04, 2010 9:32 am

Oh so loki was at a funeral? nice, you showed the reader the scenery in the beginning, with little understanding of it, and then finally made it all clear in the last two posts. nice job.

OK battle field equals 30 exp right? lets get cracking then.

now Max, when i was reading your posts...i had to read them twice, and im not trying to diss you or anything, but i ain't stupid, so it kind of meant your posts needed to be either more explanatory, or cut down a bit more. Less description can equal more description at times.

but still you described the setting nicely, and showed your character, and how much of a very battle hungry person he can be.

25 exp.

now nit, oh miss nitronie. Writer of extraordinary brilliance!! yeah....10 exp. joking lol.

OK your writing was very good and descriptive, the second to last post you had done though...seemed kind of long. You could've tried to show the setting with a little less description. it kind of bored me reading it all, but gained my attention again when you started to describe little things, like the blood. Nice work none the less Mutt boy.

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