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PostSubject: A Fighting spirit.   Fri Jun 04, 2010 1:47 pm

The Moons Radiating light shone down on the demolished battle field, specs of dust and sweat reflecting the light the moon had provided giving a glistening touch to the atmosphere around the two determined warriors. They both were sweating profusely and blood seemed to have intermixed with the sweat as it started to drip down their naked chests. Both with the same poise and stance like mirror images, unarmed combatants, and the finest in Soul society.
“So Kin, I hear you’ve made a decision on what squad you’re going to enter,” The man exhaled aggressively.
“Yeah Squad 11, why you askin?” Kin copied his opponent abruptly with a devilish smile on his face.
“Well, I don’t think its ideal for you, you see…those that enter the ranks of squad 11...don’t quite make it back.” The other combatant didn’t lose an ounce of poise, but you could tell he was speaking from the heart.
“Don’t worry about me Clegger’s, now fight me seriously, im barely bleeding here.” The young Estigon moved his right foot forward and clenched his fists tighter; he had no interest in Talk. He wanted to become stronger than ever. But as those single words ‘fight me seriously’ had left kin’s lips his opponent had completely disappeared from his sight, and he was completely baffled. He Left his sturdy stance and started to circle the area, looking around in all directions. Left, right, up, down, left, right, up and lastly downwards. He stopped when he looked down, and continued to hold his head down to try and recycle the factors in the environment around him.

Suddenly he turned around full swing, clashing his right arm with his opponent’s. Going into a perfect and sturdy stance in such swiftness it was astonishing. They continued to lock their arms together until kin instinctively jumped back as he was losing the struggle.

“You could decipher my location…how?”

“You used shunpo, correct?” he continued to explain. “Well you couldn’t get right next to me with out being noticed…and when you stopped behind me the momentum you was going at gave off a small breeze when you stopped, that moved the specs of dust in the area…if the moon wasn’t out then you could’ve caught me.” Kin grinned as he explained his theory and resumed his stance he had been in a couple of seconds ago.

“You’ve become smarter Kin…you saw through a low level shunpo…”

Wait…low level…if it wasn’t for the wind…I…DAMN IT!’ Kin thought

“Ha-ha only kidding, you’ve got a lot to learn about shunpo, but you did good using your environment to your advantage.”

Clegger tightened his fists again and followed Kin’s lead in taking the basic unarmed stance of soul society, the leading hand extended toward his opponent, arched a bit, and his off hand held at his side ready to block an attack. His feet partially bent and parallel to his leading and off hands positioning.

“I’ve wanted to ask you this, kin,” Master Spinster switched his leading hand to his right hand, adjusting his whole stance all together. “Why do you have that charm necklace on you still?”

“Well it’s a charm I got from a tournament I fought in rukongai…against a swords man…” He said as he left his stance and began to fiddle with his blue charm necklace restlessly. “I beat the swordsman…and he just wouldn’t let up…so he tried to kill me…and the one man that tried to save me died…” He grasped his charm tightly, streams of tears running down his face as he did. “Kain zolick…the other swords mans simply watched and stared as he died…I took his charm as it was stained with blood, and washed it to give back to the family…but that was the problem…he had no family.”

Everything went deathly silent. The radiant light from the moon even dissipated, and both fighters were left in a dim, dull light. It seemed as though the atmosphere was reflecting Kin’s heart.

“You’re not telling me all the details kin; it sounds like your story has holes in it…like how did he di-”

“Drop the subject and fight me Cleg’s…your burning moon light.”

Suddenly as kin finished his statement, he bolted towards Master Clegger’s at great speed winding his right fist in preparation of an unholy punch in the gut. But it seemed that Kin had been reckless in thinking he could land a direct hit on Master Clegger, who was already making his own preparations on evading the attack. He placed his palms together and aligned his legs as well; his body was totally aligned to itself as much as it possibly could.

“You may be strong Clegger, but this punch will do some damage, so id-”

“Hado 9-”

KIDO?!

Kin’s direction of running was being jeopardised as the ground itself was denying him of his momentum needed flurry against his opponent Master Clegger. The Master however had a most devilish smile painted on his face. A level two kido, what was he thinking?

‘Analyse the situation kin…he has made the earth shake with kido…so he is using reiastu, but also he seems to be unable to mo-’

It wasn’t kin’s day at all, he kept on getting more and more surprises as the moon light started to thin out as time went by, slowly but surely. But this time he was interrupted by Master Clegger’s sudden hand movement as both of them collided with the ground beneath him and in addition to his quick hands, he increased the magnitude of the earthquake.

What is this?’ Kin came to a sudden halt as his eyes caught an astonishing display of kido strength.

GAIA’S AWAKENING!

I thought you needed to chant to call on so much strength! Who is Master Clegger?

Suddenly seven large boulders jolted from beneath the ground and circled the very vulnerable shinigami, larger than his whole body and tougher than any of his most forceful blows. He was still in shock from the boulders sudden appearance, which only made things worst. The continuous shaking of the ground still didn’t dissipate even though the spell had already been cast, and the tremors only became stronger over time. A kido spell with no chant, several large boulders and a master swordsman who has already surprised kin with his unarmed mastery…this was no ordinary Kendo teacher.

“Who-” kin’s balanced was beginning to give way due to the unmerciful movement of the earth beneath his feet; it was getting in the way of his statements. “T-The hell A-A-A!!! ARE YOU?! And how do you know kido!” mid way of his sentence the grassy land beneath his feet stopped shaking so rapidly and began to calm itself down.

“Phew…wa-wait…the boulders…oh shit crackers.”

And his partial premonitions were correct, the boulders were doing something, and it was definitely hazardous to Kin’s health. They were already circling the young shinigami but they were moving much more rapidly than normal and also rotating as though he were the sun and the boulders, orbiting planets, and one of the theorys on the earth is that one day…its going to head toward the sun and collide with it.
Control of this magnitude isn’t attainable with one mere kido spell…’ Kin thought. “MASTER CLEGGER YOUR IN SHIKAI AIN’T YA?!”

But it seemed His opponent didn’t wish to hear his squabbles any longer, it was decided as the boulders increased even further in speed and acceleration and finally, closed in on Kin with a great Thud following after.

“Wow…you are a smart one Kin…but thanks to my assailant Krystal, well…you should know the rest.” Clegger moved away from his very stiff and quite uncomfortable position and made his way briskly toward the cave-in that was Kin’s containment.

“Don’t piss me off Clegger!”

It was strange; Clegger was standing right next to where kin should have buried but his voice didn’t sound muffed neither did his voice even sound like It was coming from that specific area. He had some how escaped the boulders wrath but little did he know Clegger knew he’d take the advantage of such a shocking result.

Demonic!-”

Kin bellowed from behind Clegger, sprinting at obscene speed as he did, with his right arm arched and extended behind him and his left hand extended out towards his master, aiming his soon to come punch.

“Your way to loud Kin…” Clegger said in an annoyed tone.

PUNCH!

Kin was one and a half feet away from his Master before he threw his punch with all his force, sacrificing his balance along with it; it was certain this was his last and finalizing attack. Or so he thought. Clegger already had a mischievous smile on his face so it was already clear he was planning something. He turned around just as Kin launched his attack and made a quick right handed chop to the boy’s inner elbow, forcing his arm to prematurely collapse, but this wasn’t all, he also used his left hand to deliver an unmerciful upper cut to his abdominal area. Needless to say, Master unarmed combatant plus massive strength times upper cut equals victory!

“You can’t be so loud ma boy…” Clegger smiled while kin’s whole body was merely hanging lifelessly on his fist.

“one, you paid no attention to my statement about my accomplice, Krystal who could’ve killed you from the shadows as you didn’t notice her already, and two…well im a master in the art of fighting…I saw you shunpo, so yeah, better luck next time little man. One thing does bother me though…you’re too reckless…and fear nothing and yet…”

Clegger noticed his pupil’s skin stretch a bit; it was the effects of a smile sprouting on his face, unconscious as he was, and he still had fun.

“You love that rush of fighting.”

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Kin Estigon

unseated, Shinigami

Lvl1

Age: 93

Shikai: Darkness and Light alike, vanish from my sight, Zoghan!

Spirit:
HP 10
Reiastu 10
Body:
Strength:3
Agility: 5
Endurance: 2
Rei: 0
Skills:
Swordsman: 0
unarmed: 7
Shunpo: 3

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PostSubject: Re: A Fighting spirit.   Sat Jun 05, 2010 12:42 am

ok, technically good, but not truly amazing, so you definitely won't get a perfect score.

i liked the idea of your opponent using his shikai, but also using an earthen kido, which could fool the opponent into thinking it was all the kido spell, although the end result would be pretty much the same, the opponent would just figure you control the earth, so while an interesting trick i don't see it having that great an effect.

and your character doesn't choose his squad, especially an unseated one. while you the player may, your character would not. so

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PostSubject: Re: A Fighting spirit.   Sat Jun 05, 2010 4:17 am

well gaia's awakening isn't to much of a strong strong kido, using the boulders to contain the opponent with makes more of a kido spell, he knew kin would notice. As you can see from the training Kin thinks alot and tries to analyse his opponent, so i understand where your coming from, i'll try and think of another strategy next time.

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Kin Estigon

unseated, Shinigami

Lvl1

Age: 93

Shikai: Darkness and Light alike, vanish from my sight, Zoghan!

Spirit:
HP 10
Reiastu 10
Body:
Strength:3
Agility: 5
Endurance: 2
Rei: 0
Skills:
Swordsman: 0
unarmed: 7
Shunpo: 3

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