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 Kuroi-Raion Yorudan's Undesired Meet With Kin Estigon

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PostSubject: Kuroi-Raion Yorudan's Undesired Meet With Kin Estigon   Kuroi-Raion Yorudan's Undesired Meet With Kin Estigon EmptyWed Jun 02, 2010 2:38 pm

Things weren't going according to plan for Yorudan. He'd believeed that each training session he'd given just enough to scrape by, shown just enough skill to avoid being placed in the lime light for being too good or not good enough.

Apparently either his Lieutenant or Captain saw him as being not good enough. One of them saw fit to arrange a meeting between himself and another recruit who just wasn't showing the skills necessary with a sword.

"Me, not good enough with a sword?" He said almost laughing as he set idle waiting for the other unskilled recruit's arrival. Perhaps it was time to show just a bit more effort, though he wouldn't need to if a superior wasn't going to be present for this meeting.

The natural light from the sunlight outside was the only light that illuminated the small dojo. Yorudan hadn't bothered to light any candles.
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"Meet a comrade in the midst of battle...what the fuck is that supposed to mean?!" The young Street brawler scrunched up the piece of paper in his grasp and threw it briskly on the floor beside him and began to walk inside The bouken sword Dojo. He stood at the thresh hold wth a look of astonishment as he stared into the eyes of his opponent, it was decided by basic instinct, a fight was going to happen.

"Kin Estigon, glad to make your acquaintance..."
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Several people passed the entrance but no one actually came in, not until a seemingly obnoxious stranger.

"Kin Estigon, I am Kuroi-Raion Yorudan." He said politely while standing, and turning to face the newcomer. He bowed slightly before making his way over one of the few wooden sword racks in the room. "I take it that the people who arranged this meeting won't actually be in attendance today."

He grabbed the two wooden swords that he'd become accustomed to using and placed them on the ground next to him parallel to one another. The cracks from his previous spar with Ariya Maximus riddled both, but they most likely wouldn't be a problem. Especially against someone whom had little skill with a sword.

"One or two?" He asked before deciding on a number for himself. "A single sword will do for someone who lacks as much skill as they say you do." He took up a single practice sword from the rack and tossed it to Kin.
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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi-Raion Yorudan's Undesired Meet With Kin Estigon   Kuroi-Raion Yorudan's Undesired Meet With Kin Estigon EmptyWed Jun 02, 2010 3:00 pm

Kin looked at Yorudan strangely, analysing him properly and considering factors of which could be his own downfall, and he had already found one in only 1 minute of seeing him. 'defending against his blows will prove to be trouble some...he seems like he knows what he is talking about when it comes to using swords by the way he addresses me... I better get protection.' He thought

"I'd like another one of those wooden swords please, Kuroi-Raion, if you don't mind"
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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi-Raion Yorudan's Undesired Meet With Kin Estigon   Kuroi-Raion Yorudan's Undesired Meet With Kin Estigon EmptyWed Jun 02, 2010 3:07 pm

"I don't think you understand." Yorudan said calmly. "A two sword fighting style is more difficult to grasp then a single. I'll tell you what I'll do." He said while turning to pick up his own swords. "We'll both train with one so that you don't feel as though you're at any disadvantage." He placed one of his wooden swords on the rack and turned back towards Kin.

"Do you know if they'll be coming in to check on us later? If not then I think we should make this quick. I'd rather be spending my time training alone than with someone who..." He stopped himself mid sentence before signaling for Kin to follow him to the center of the floor.
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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi-Raion Yorudan's Undesired Meet With Kin Estigon   Kuroi-Raion Yorudan's Undesired Meet With Kin Estigon EmptyThu Jun 03, 2010 4:45 am

'so he refuses me two swords beca-...wait...does he think im here for swordsmanship lessons?! fuck that!'

"Kuroi-Raion, I'm sorry but I would like padding for my legs and arms please...i don't want to make any mistakes and get whacked on bare skin...i hear wooden swords have a tendency to leave bruise's." The young kin gave his opponent a childish and innocent smile as his bouken sword dangled in his grip.
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"I...suppose." He responded. "He can't possibly be this clumsy with a sword." He thought to himself as he quickly grabbed padding for the man before tossing them at him.

He firmly gripped his practice weapon after returning to his place on the mat.
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"thank you,"Kin began suiting himself up with the padding while also keeping a keen eye on his opponent, Yorudan. After he was finished he started bouncing on the spot, switching his feet orientation and stabilizing his breath. Giving the padding a little test run.

"haha, lets begin then!" Kin bent down to pick up his wooden sword and held it parallel to the radius of his arm allowing the hilt to extend out of his outer fist, and then awaiting his opponent to react.
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"First we'll work on..." Pausing, he noticed the odd bouncing of his training partner. "Defensive sword movements. The way your holding your sword right now is more advanced movement. You may want to keep it simple this session." He said while settling into a relaxed but defensive stance.

"And you might want to try not bouncing around so much."
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"haha ok," He did what yorudan said and stopped jumping, but without hesitation he also sent his one instrument spinning towards yorudans head, trying to disrupt his opponents line of sight.

'lets just hope i can pull this one off' he thought to himself, just before he disappeared all together with a peculiar sound following him. His destination would be behind yorudan and his attack strategy; a low leg kick to the back of his knee caps, while also crossing both of his hands round his mid section in preparation of a counter attack.
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"All right then..." He responded. As Kin's instrument came at him he rose his wooden sword in preparation for a parrying demonstration. The wooden swords never touched. The moment Yorudan raised his practice weapon Kin had vanished.

The next thing he knew he was falling backwards. But what was it, he thought as he landed back up on the training mat. His question was soon answered as he looked up at the person that caused his downfall.

"Kin Estigon..." He said more confused than annoyed. "Unless I'm mistaken that was flash step." Yorudan mumbled as he rose to his feet. "It makes little sense for me to train you when you already have something that I myself have not bothered to learn."

"You're the second training partner I've had that is is pathetic enough to pull deceptive tricks during a simple training session." After standing he turned and placed his sword on the wooden rack with the others. "Maybe you can spend time along meditating as opposed to playing games?" He said while walking towards the exit.
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"yorudan!! don't be stupid! and also don't turn your back to an opponent." Kin smiled once again and grabbed two swords off the rack. "if your slow you'll get hit by this, and then i'll knock you out with a series of punches, but if you catch it and i come at you, your gonna have no option but to defend yourself!"

He extended both of his arms holding both of the swords with a fierce grip outwards beside him, and crossed them again at a blinding speed, propelling both swords at Yorudan's torso on target.
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After tossing the swords at Yorudan it became clear that Kin wanted a fight. He quickly turned closing the dojo doors as he did so. He bent his upper body slightly. This allowed for the wooden blades to harmlessly pass his own body and collide with the thick paper sections of the sliding door.

The swords penetrated the paper slightly, but didn't completely fly threw them. He pulled each out by the hilt before locking eyes with his opponent. "I'm not impressed."
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"of course your not, well not yet anyway." Kin crossed his arms over his head as if protecting himself from a vertical swipe to the cranium, but this was not the case. He was preparing himself for a full blown attack on Yorudan, using the bare flesh turtle technique.

"Your not so great with unarmed abilities so let me show you one, its called bare skin turtle." Kin tensed all of his muscles, predominately in the torso area as he started to give his techniques explanation. "its an ability using momentum and overall force!" He once again disappeared from sight but only to re appear 3 large steps backwards prior from his original position. "but unfortunately, the opponent needs to come to me first...so...come little coloured man."
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"I'd rather not." He said while quickly swinging his swords through the air as if to calculate just how much power he wanted to put into the first blow he dealt his opponent. His opponent's second flashstep gave him insight as to just what kind of opponent he was facing. "Shunpo allows the user to move at a speed beyond what the eye can pick up. However even that won't be enough to win this."
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'now lets analyse the situation, the opponent has two wooden swords, non lethal, but his swipes i must presume are faster than my movements...so I need to take precautions on keeping my self either guarded or at a reasonable...WAIT!" suddenly kin had an idea, perhaps the best one he could think of in this specific situation. He dissappeared for the third time and re appeared two feet away from Yorudan, protecting his face with his crossed arms and his right leg propelling towards his opponents face. It was a gamble, but a gamble he had to take.
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While shunpo was faster than the eye could see, the beginnings of a flash step were not completely beyond Yorudan's comprehension. He knew that the moment Kin flash stepped he would need to act. How he should act however, could only be determined after he completed a flash step and arrived at his destination.

The moment Yorudan saw Kin vanish he raised his practice weapons in preparation and the moment Kin reappeared Yorudan knew exactly what needed to be done. He brought his right blade up and into Kin's leg. Whilst twisting into the swing he quickly turned into an offensive strike with the wooden sword in his left hand. He aimed a speedy slash at Kin's unguarded midsection.
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"GAH" kin couldn't block or get out of the way of the midsection attack, but his durability was enough to withstand it. 'wait, he is guarding my leg, hit me in my side, so his two weapons are in use...meaning" in a flash kin threw two quick consecutive jabs towards his opponents face, while tensing his right leg stopping his opponent from using his defensive instrument to defend his punch, even if he does use that sword to block his punch his right leg will drag him down to the floor and it'd be all over for him, (p.s these actions where being done as the sword was colliding kin's midsection, and his off leg was secure on the ground, it wasn't a jumping attack at all.) after this though he would fall back on the ground from the shock of being hit.
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Kin's punches made contact with both Yorudan's chin and his forehead. Though he managed to hold on to both training instruments the blow threw him backwards and through the frail sliding doors. He stumbled backwards and into the railing separating the walk way from the garden outside.

"How annoying...even more so than Ariya Maximus." He thought to himself as walked forward and placed the wooden swords before the now broken door frame. He gave a polite bow to Kin before standing upright and walking off.

((Match over I believe...-_-))
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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi-Raion Yorudan's Undesired Meet With Kin Estigon   Kuroi-Raion Yorudan's Undesired Meet With Kin Estigon EmptyThu Jun 03, 2010 8:13 pm

Man, this fight ended pretty quickly! But at least, there was a legitimate reason.

Blaz, you did pretty well on this thread. It was a potentially good fight though, and I don't think you should have been that reckless, but Kin is reckless as I've seen in the omake I've graded. So as long as you stick with character, kudos. Overall, I think you did good, but next time, try and get some more hits in. Your character can do so much more in fights. Don't be afraid to take shots.

You get 17 exp.

Fro, your writing was good. I like how Yorudan made that comeback in the end like I told you on pm in Chatango. I really have no qualms with you, but as mentioned, the fight ended pretty quickly. If you write with someone, coordinate with them some more before positing so that you make a nice thread.

20 exp for you.

Don't get me wrong. This wasn't bad, far from it. In fact, this was a great start for the rivalry and hatred between both of your characters that could make for good reading in the future when both characters are involved.
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Thanks.
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Thanks but in my defence, in the beginning i could have taken him out from my leg sweep and then given him 2 quick blows to his vulnerable body but that'd be to quick again, but thanks anyway.
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